|Reviews for Veiled Candle|
| JackieTheWarriorPrincess 9/6/05 . chapter 1
The entire poem was good but for some reason I thought the last line was the best.
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 8/22/05 . chapter 1
Another effing great poem. One of these days I might become jealous of your talent.
| milhistbuff1 5/1/05 . chapter 1
poignant, dark but still a sense of hope. " Yet always, a candle shimmers somewhere in the darkness." Its only when no candle shines at all, that hope is lost.- great job, Matt
| Draven DarkCrow 4/22/05 . chapter 1
well done...very strong images...I like it.
| I Found Myself At 24 9/9/04 . chapter 1
Hm, not sure I really like this one. *gasp* Is that possible? I dunno, it just didn't fit the title very well. It was a good poem, but the title still doesn't seem to fit. Maybe a new title?
| Tom Madden 8/30/04 . chapter 1
sad..but that spark of hope i love. nicely written. great job! tom
| Steel Winged Angel 8/29/04 . chapter 1
Sweet, sweet sweet! It starts out all sorrowful and melancholic and ends with a faint glimmer of hope. Love it!
| Deirdra Chaeli 8/27/04 . chapter 1
beautiful, and perfect. I have written poems about this before, but yours is my favorite. wonderful *grins*
| behind the velvet curtain 5/1/04 . chapter 1
So very true... I know this feeling. But, in the words of a very wise friend of mine, there is always hope...Always.
Very good poem, once again. You're quite good. You make my poems seem so..horrible. Ah, well...
| Cry Tears of Darkness 4/30/04 . chapter 1
| lalamushu 4/7/04 . chapter 1
this poem is really beautiful. keep up the good work.