The entire poem was good but for some reason I thought the last line was the best.

Another effing great poem. One of these days I might become jealous of your talent.

poignant, dark but still a sense of hope. " Yet always, a candle shimmers somewhere in the darkness." Its only when no candle shines at all, that hope is lost.- great job, Matt

well done...very strong images...I like it.

xo

Hm, not sure I really like this one. *gasp* Is that possible? I dunno, it just didn't fit the title very well. It was a good poem, but the title still doesn't seem to fit. Maybe a new title?

sad..but that spark of hope i love. nicely written. great job! tom

Sweet, sweet sweet! It starts out all sorrowful and melancholic and ends with a faint glimmer of hope. Love it!
Hawke

beautiful, and perfect. I have written poems about this before, but yours is my favorite. wonderful *grins*

So very true... I know this feeling. But, in the words of a very wise friend of mine, there is always hope...Always.
Very good poem, once again. You're quite good. You make my poems seem so..horrible. Ah, well...
-Keep Writing-

nice!

this poem is really beautiful. keep up the good work.