|Reviews for Demon of the Violin|
| mizu no kokoro 4/15/04 . chapter 1
interesting ... XD
Never the same
| swift sky silver 4/14/04 . chapter 1
you've got a nice rhyme scheme going with this poem. great choice of words. keep it up0)
| breakdown in the waiting room 4/13/04 . chapter 1
Oh. . .*shudders* Creepy.
Some metaphors/word choices were off. "pony?" And there's a typo ("Wonderring.") But that aside, this feels so, I don't know, 19th century England. The rhyming- was it a form of sonnet?
Fantastic imagery- love the Poe influence at the beginning!
| TalieZ 4/7/04 . chapter 1
This would be a really good poem if you worked more on the rhyming.