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| Reviews for Demon of the Violin |
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   mizu no kokoro 4/15/04 . chapter 1interesting ... XD Never the same |
| swift sky silver 4/14/04 . chapter 1 you've got a nice rhyme scheme going with this poem. great choice of words. keep it up0) |
| breakdown in the waiting room 4/13/04 . chapter 1 Oh. . .*shudders* Creepy. Some metaphors/word choices were off. "pony?" And there's a typo ("Wonderring.") But that aside, this feels so, I don't know, 19th century England. The rhyming- was it a form of sonnet? Fantastic imagery- love the Poe influence at the beginning! -Jessica |
| TalieZ 4/7/04 . chapter 1 This would be a really good poem if you worked more on the rhyming. |
