 Desiree Dee 2004-08-12 . chapter 1This was good, but it probably would have made more sense if I had read the novel it was based off of. Still, it has a nice structure with a dynamic impact. I also like the way it causes someone to think. Too many are out there to strictly entertain, and that shouldn't be what it is all about. |
 Mya von Dor 2004-04-07 . chapter 1Just so you all know, there's supposed to be a space before each time I mention "the war was a great success" but I couldn't get it to do that, sigh. (and I thought I'd add that A memo to The President is not a line in it as well as the title, it's just the title.) |