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| Earthsong12 2004-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis is neat. I like the way you hear Crow’s thoughts. He;s a bit stupid, going out the window when they said he could leave. Oh, wait, he didn’t want an escort! I get it! ^_^ OK, enough random musings. Good job! Bye! |
| Akura loves Sanzo 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYou know how much I like cookies... SANZO COOKIES! Ehehe... you actually used a swear word!! *waggles finger* after you lecturing me about using that word... > |
| SilverKisses4UOnly 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved it humorous also :) |
| freethephoenix 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was funny. "WTF"?? was that part nessesary?? Actually I think that added to the humor. I was just looking for something to criticize. Guess there's not much to criticize about a funny story that makes you laugh eh? Okay, I reviewed you like you asked... now you review me! ;) jk |