This is neat. I like the way you hear Crow’s thoughts. He;s a bit stupid, going out the window when they said he could leave. Oh, wait, he didn’t want an escort! I get it! ^_^ OK, enough random musings. Good job! Bye!

You know how much I like cookies... SANZO COOKIES! Ehehe... you actually used a swear word!! *waggles finger* after you lecturing me about using that word... >

I loved it humorous also :)

That was funny. "WTF"?? was that part nessesary??
Actually I think that added to the humor. I was just looking for something to criticize. Guess there's not much to criticize about a funny story that makes you laugh eh?
Okay, I reviewed you like you asked... now you review me! ;) jk