Not my personal favorite, but it's good all the same. I like your longer, non-rhyming poems. Where are the demons, where is the darkness, where are they love? I kid.
Hawke

not my absolute favorite, but it is well-written.

i am not a rhymer...so my hat is off to you...and kudos for your publication! what an accomplishment!

Wow... I love the rhyming. You really captured Hope, this is so good.
-Keep Writing-

aw thats really nice

Merry Meet!
What a lovely, uplifting poem! Great rhyming :)
I've written a few poems with similar points, which reminds me to thank you for the review :)
keep writing!
Blessed Be,
Andaren x

*speechless*(Day of Silence )
i really liked this.
i wish that i could rhyme.
alas,i it rhymes coming from me,it took forever to finish.
always
your irish lover

This poem is absolutley amazing. You have a great talent.
Salix Nigra
Thanks for reviewing my work!

good times indeed
beautiful

The format for this poem is really good. I haven't seen it often used, and I love the description. Ah, to hell with it, I love all (or almost all) description! XD
Hrm once again I think you could have replaced a few words with some others, but it is hard to find ones that rhyme. It tells its story very precisely, and the little embellishments make it all that more enjoyable. Great job!
Karasu

Wow, I think you captured the true meaning of hope with this poem.