Cute? Ok...I beg to differ on the idea that this is cute. It's hopeful is what it is. A glimpse at one's self. I think cute to be fawns dancing through a meadow or something. That's just me. ANyway, nice poem dear one.
Hawke

interesting... and yes, very "cute" and "sweet." But don't you hate hearing those words in a review? I liked how the last line contrasted with the prettiness of the rest of the poem.

aw sad! good but sad.

When you said "cutesy" I was thinking "fluff" lol, but it was deeper than I thought it would be and I happened to like it. :-) I like the words "glimpse" and "glimmered" only used two lines apart, and I loved the ending line. Great work (yet again)!

oh pretty! it is cutsy, but in a good way! "It glimmered a moment in the emptyness of the darkling sky/My eye caught a reflection from it, it was my soul flying by," love those lines! your rhyming was really good, the whole poem flowed well

I like a lot. Nice concept, too.
Kind of makes ya think. It is short but it does offer a lot of possiblities. Should revisit this one some time and see what you can pull from it.
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