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| unknown'writer'loved 2008-03-27 ch 9,  | abuseoh my gosh i'm tired just stayed up for about four hours to read your story flawless pt1 & pt2 so far it wouldn't usually take me so long but in my house, there's loads of interruptions so. *yawn* oh my gosh, i love this story so much. poor kael. |
| Gravilove19 2007-06-22 ch 9, | abusemore? please update ): I really have enjoyed reading your story. |
| Oki3xDoki3 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuse>.< your characters are so totally molestable! I'm stalking you...and and..WHY RATE T~~ THIS IS SO CLOSE TO AN M~ >.< arGH! I still love you anyway~~ :glomps: |
| DeadlyPinkPuchu 2007-04-07 ch 9, | abusewhy did you stop writing? |
| Satan's Angelic Mistress 2007-02-02 ch 9, | abuseTry to update sometime soon please? Also, can I have Mattie? Love your characters, um, again with the wanting an update...oh dear...I'm sorta...persistent... |
| iwishillwilluponyou 2007-01-15 ch 9, | abuse*sobs* wah you can't just leave it like that! |
| Shadow 2007-01-08 ch 9, anon. | abusehey i love this and i've told u a million times so please UPDATE i wanna no wht happens to the twins! MORE SOON! |
| Kyle's Precious Little Girl 2006-12-17 ch 9, | abuse*gasp* update update update update update update update!! please please please please please please! Don't leave me in suspense!! it's getting so good!! --Kyle's Precious Little Girl |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-14 ch 9, | abuseOh my goodness i'm going to cry! Keal's going to do something stupid isn't he! and Sully still hasn't told him that he loves him back! STUPID SULLY! please up date? please? i want to readmore and i can't unless you up date! |
| Imaginary Rose Productions 2006-11-01 ch 9, | abuseI'm not the best at writing reviews. I usually just say somthing like the standard 'Great story. Please update soon' or if I give suggestions. I'll try to give it a variation. Here it goes: Great story. Please update soon, it has been over two years since your last update. |
| NightPredator 2006-09-04 ch 9, | abuseOh crap. Please don't tell me that Kael is leaving! He's just such a cutie pie! I agree with Sully. Keal does deserve everything the world can give. O_O Poor twins. They've been found out by their father. I hope everything goes as smoothly as it can for them. I LOVE THE BROTHERLY INCEST LOVE! It's just so sweet and endearing. Hey, isn't there a prize for the winner of the art thingy? It would probably be money, wouldn't it. So, if Mikah won then he would be able to go to the school again! ^_^ I DO HAVE A BRAIN! Absolutely LOVE the story. It's freakishly wicked. :) I can't wait for the next chapter |
| Back of Beyond 2006-09-01 ch 9, | abuseAmazing story, as was Flawless. Can't believe you haven't updated since 2004! :( |
| Shadesome 2006-08-13 ch 9, | abuseI like this! Sadly, this is one of those times when I must urge an Author to update. This is VERY good. I think you should start writing some more. |
| Kizuna 2006-08-06 ch 9, | abuseOH MY GOD! I hope you update soon, please,please,please!! I see that this was posted in 2004 and, well, since we are in 2006... Have you given up this story??:'( You can't..! You can't leave it like this! What will the twins's father say? What is Kael going to do? What about Mikah and Skylar?!! Please update! |
| Kizuna 2006-08-06 ch 8, | abuseKael is rich!I hope he do fine!^^ And stays with Sully!!:) Hmm... So, did anything happen between Robyn and Mattie? That would be so awsome!^^ Eheh! Hoping for more Skylar/Mikah fluff!!^^ |