This reads like a song, with the second and fourth stanzas sticking out as the chorus.
"Today you I'll avoid" is a little awkward.
In the last stanza, third line, it should be "you're fake".
This person sounds like a typical prep. I don't miss that part of high school.

Pretty good, definately powerful. Badly written? I don't think so.
Sorry for the late review, i'm just able to get on a computer now in vacation. Great work though! Excellent stuff!

Today your not gonna get to me... your should be you're
not one of your best no.. but i can relate aas can most other people im sure

oMG that was brilliant, and it actually reminded me of one of my friends. nice job!
Keris-Rain