| Reviews for Broken |
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Fiontari 8/29/04 . chapter 1 "See what money has done. see what war has won, There is no justice here". The last line is so powerful. Amazing! Hawke |
Cry Tears of Darkness 4/28/04 . chapter 1thats so bloody true! and good as well. wow... im like, speechless! |
Aki Akito 4/21/04 . chapter 1...Tight, great poem, once again, great discription. |
I Found Myself At 24 4/12/04 . chapter 1Another good one! My fave line has to be "Hope falls from numb hands, speechless mouths can nothing say". Great job again! :) |