|Reviews for Broken|
| Fiontari 8/29/04 . chapter 1
"See what money has done.
see what war has won,
There is no justice here". The last line is so powerful. Amazing!
| Cry Tears of Darkness 4/28/04 . chapter 1
thats so bloody true! and good as well. wow... im like, speechless!
| Aki Akito 4/21/04 . chapter 1
...Tight, great poem, once again, great discription.
| I Found Myself At 24 4/12/04 . chapter 1
Another good one! My fave line has to be "Hope falls from numb hands, speechless mouths can nothing say". Great job again! :)