 Katterree Fengari 2004-06-25 . chapter 1very good.
On the third line, I think the 'is' should be an 'are', if it's refering to the blond and blue-eyed (people)
It could probably still be is, if it's refering to the race
You need to have some punctuation to clear that up at least..
I really do like this poem |