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Reviews For: Children of the Holocaust
PM20 2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Really powerful poem, short but has a great rhythm. I like how even though the title pretty much sums up what the poem is about you add in references like David's star and Hitler really get your message across. Thanks for sharing.
Serene Waters 2004-10-09 . chapter 1
Line 16 says:
"Don't know they evil they created"
Did you mean 'THE evil they created'?
This was very good otherwise. I'm actually doing a dance about the holocaust right now and we're reading "The Night of Shattered Glass", this poem fits right in there with it. Great job.
Katterree Fengari 2004-06-25 . chapter 1
very good.
On the third line, I think the 'is' should be an 'are', if it's refering to the blond and blue-eyed (people)
It could probably still be is, if it's refering to the race
You need to have some punctuation to clear that up at least..
I really do like this poem
simpleplan13 2004-04-09 . chapter 1
very sad and powerful... amazing poem
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