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wow great but I gotta run I just got great inspiration it will be called "Brite Eyes" inspiration darkpalain13 yeah baby awesome writer's block is gone Silk and Lace Love always ~Kaylee~

that's sweet that it's written for a friend!! I really like the chorus, it's quite catchy. I can just picture Eminem rapping this- sorry if you don't like him- I do. It reminds me of his 8 Mile song I think the "It's one shot, game over"- it was just really cool. I can picture someone shouting "I just don't give a Fuh yeah..." but actually the word- I loved it, write on!

I was just looking at all the reviews each of your poems has...'m jeleous...but I can see why. They are al very good, and you are very talented...what more can I say...
ANNA

If I wasn't in school I'd get up and dance. Your songs are fantastic! I would buy ALL of your cds. Seriously. Thanks again for all of the wonderful reviews.

This is awesome, we should all live with no regrets.

Hey, I just really wanted to say thank you for the reviews you left. Reviews mean the world to me, yours were lovely, and it's really cool getting them from someone I respect. I really like your writing too, I'm just bad at leaving reviews. So thanks again, and well done with this song...it would make a nice 'feel-good' song.

i really love this... but i love all of your work so thats not a suprise lol.
much love

ooh look!! a new song! yay!! i love it!! i so agree with that "no regrets". your songs are so well written, i love them!

Hey this is cool i like it mhm im too tired to write agood review good job keep up the good work lol :D

good work! nice message too.

nice song! some real talent here

*hugs* wow!! incredibly awesomely amazingly wonderful! I LOVE THE CHORUS!! I think this has to be one of my favorite things that you'be written, it just f l o w s. very nice. spectacular, you've amazed me yet again. ^__^ and I'm sure you'll never cease to. going to the library, cya!!

Another amazing piece with a strong message and unique way of expressing your point. Whoot! Yeah! I'm so glad you're putiing new stuff up, I've been waiting!