This is good
i like the sweet change at the end
usually you just do angst (no offence)

yeah, i really like this one. nice and simple.
um...that's all i have 2 say! lol

Short but sweet. Well written, you don't limit yourself with rhyming which I find is helpful in certain poems in which rhyming just is in-flipping-possible. In any case, I really enjoyed the ending. Feel free to stop by and give me a review or two or three or more. Because I need them. It's an addiction now ^_^()(). Take care and best of luck in your poetic endeavors!