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| Squam 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good i like the sweet change at the end usually you just do angst (no offence) |
| ~Milady~ 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah, i really like this one. nice and simple. um...that's all i have 2 say! lol |
| Matthew James Current 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseShort but sweet. Well written, you don't limit yourself with rhyming which I find is helpful in certain poems in which rhyming just is in-flipping-possible. In any case, I really enjoyed the ending. Feel free to stop by and give me a review or two or three or more. Because I need them. It's an addiction now ^_^()(). Take care and best of luck in your poetic endeavors! |