Nice, god planning
*insert Ms Kelly here* But WHERE is you sentence structure? Your punctuation? Have you been doing run-on sentences?

WOOHOO i like this one 2! and again, u kno y...
yes it is a little darker - there's more SHADOW! HAHAHAHAHAHA get it?
*cough*
no, i don't think u did...

Aw, my brain is happy. I like this one, and yes it's more like your current sytle.
Now... where's my cookie?

very interesting, very pretty. ^-^