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| Squam 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice, god planning *insert Ms Kelly here* But WHERE is you sentence structure? Your punctuation? Have you been doing run-on sentences? |
| ~Milady~ 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOOHOO i like this one 2! and again, u kno y... yes it is a little darker - there's more SHADOW! HAHAHAHAHAHA get it? *cough* no, i don't think u did... |
| freethephoenix 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAw, my brain is happy. I like this one, and yes it's more like your current sytle. Now... where's my cookie? |
| PineTheFae 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abusevery interesting, very pretty. ^-^ |