thats so sad. is it true? i cant believe that someone would do something this horible to someone but i know that it's true. i wish it wasn't. it was really good and it made me cry. i dont cry at many things but this is one of them.

How pretty.. I wish I could be more eloquent but that's all I can think of right now. Pretty. Beautiful.

It is extremely sad that you only got one review for this, as it was really, really good. But I liked it, so I hope that's sort of enough. I have one major suggestion: That instead of explaining how they are abused before they "meet" each other, just not say anything. Have the whole pain thing, they know each other is in pain bla bla bla... but that the reader only finds out as the other person finds out.
I realize that would make the story a lot shorter, but I think that would also make it more interesting, you know? Because then you have less on your mind that distracts you from them being together.
Oh, and I loved your doe and ghost metaphors, they were amazing, and I have no idea how you thought of them!
I would say update soon, but it's complete so yeah.
Freedman

That was the saddest (as in sad, it made me cry) story I have ever seen. I was so good. I can't believe that teenagers could go through something so terrible.