A big ol' slab of well-written confusion, Neko-chan. I'm yer freakin' co-author and I don't know what the heck is goin' on ^^; I hope I can follow this up...Neko! You got some 'splainin' to do!! ^_~~Oni

Hmm..well..interesting enough.
It went by fast, way fast.
But
I like it.
Interesting concept; interesting story.
It's a little confusing, but still good and hopefully there's more coming soon. Right? ^_^
~Reda~

Wow. This was an AWESOME beginning to what is most likely going to become an AWESOME story.
There was one spot, though, that I thought was rather repetitive. "She put her hand out suddenly, as if suddenly remembering what remained of her manners." I think you should fix that, but that is just my opinion. Feel free to do whatever you want. I'm just suggesting the repetitiveness of that.
Can't wait for more!