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| Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-05-03 ch 16,  | abuseThat was so funny, when she was talking about the NTG plan, and she was chucking rocks at him! I starting laughing so hard! Which was kind of bad, because I was drinking mountain dew at the time, so I almost choked myself to death trying not to spew soda on my moniter. My lymph nodes are in pain now. Thanks a lot! (I mean that both sarcastically and sincerely.) |
| Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-05-03 ch 13, | abuseMy favorite character doesn't have a name. Actually, it would be more correct for me to say, "characters". I just love the evil rabbits with their terrifying yellow eyes... |
| Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI thought your choice in names was rather funny. My sister's name is Rhiannon, and she is always trying to get people to call her Rhian. When I read that, I just had to show her, and then she laughed. Alot. Because that is kind of coincidental. I'm sorry, I'm not a very good reviewer. This story is awesome, so I will now read the rest of it. |
| laughing.through.tears 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Everybody else was staring at me funny, but I loved it! Yay for Sir Bob! |
| K.B. and C.B. 2008-04-19 ch 18, | abuseOMG! I wish I had read this story earlier! So far, I'm loving all of your stories! Especially OSTSG & KoT! Don't stop writting! Fictionpress needs writters like you; writters that can actually depict a story without being cliche or making it seem impossible to follow. I am DEFINETLY reading the sequel! =] Your biggest fan, -K.B. |
| merylin 2008-03-26 ch 18, anon. | abuseokay...first things first...i really liked your story, the plot, the characters, everything...there are a few things that i didn't really like...first was her rambling...um...during the times in the story that she was rambling, i kind of lost interest in what she was saying...especially if it was the same thing over and over again...also, the thing about the rabbit...didn't really get why she became so afraid of rabbits...well, that's all really...all in all though, out of ten, i'd probably give this story a 9... :P anyway...hope to read more of your stories! :P lovelots, merylin |
| merylin 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abusei usually don't comment on the first chapaters when the story is finished, but i just had to say that i was VERY amused...i tried saying the name and i always ended up saying it the wrong way...and i just had to tell you that you use too many words...i get so confused...but i really like the plot of the story... :D good work! i will keep on reading now... lovelots, merylin |
| rosieroo 2008-03-11 ch 18, | abuseohh! thats so beautiful! well,, I didnt feel sick!! this is an awesome story!! |
| vampluver12 2008-02-16 ch 8, | abusei luv this story it is soo funny! |
| Adanael 2008-02-11 ch 18, | abuseI loved it! There were parts that were totally random, evil rabbits. I must admit it is something i could see riley or i writing like |
| ggg 2008-01-26 ch 18, anon. | abuseat times annoying and repetative but over all it was cute. |
| Erikaizzle 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusehey, I loved this so much! It was one of the best stories I've ever read! I would have to say that it is undecidable...my fav character! I love Gavin & Nolan & i love Rhian! :) Are you obsessed with evil rabbits? Just wondering...LOL :) |
| Starlight - Crimson Moon 2007-12-20 ch 18, | abuse*laughs softly* What an awsome story this was. I'm definately looking forward to the sequal. You should almost write the same story, only from Gavin's point of veiw, that would be funny as well. At anyrate, loved it emensely. Favorite for sure ^-^ |
| Cailin O'Keefe 2007-12-08 ch 18, | abuseYour sense of humor is such a delight, I really enjoyed reading this! I fell terribly in love with the characters, save for Lana and It. (What was his name again?) The way you weaved this story was intriguing and smooth, the narrative really caught me up into the flow and I quite honestly didn't want it to stop. Reading Rhian go on was a tremendous amusement, she really reminds me of myself and my own thought patterns. ^__^ I'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future, pray I have the time as I did today! ~*~*Cailin*~*~ |
| littlewitchgirl77 2007-11-28 ch 4, | abuseits so good really good |