Wo, i can't wait for the next chapter...dun dun dun. WHAT WILL HAPPEN! Hee Hee _ keep it up. I want many many chapters, this is so funny. Cool

i know i'm whining, i know really and i'm sorry but I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT because that's a truly good story which makes me laugh alone in front of my computer making my family think i'm crazy (well, it's not as if they didn't think so before..)!and just for that you won one of my private awards!please update soon
lou

gosh that was hilarious! I was about to cry i was laughing so hard when she was dancing with herself.. funny. ok well please write more.. i also have a thing for dark haired guys with blue eyes so i identify with her. also being hyserically funny myself lol -

That was the most creative most wonderful fic I have eer read so far! I congratulate you! You have had me laughing throught the 6 chapters so far! Its hard to make me laugh but the sarcasm and irony and the events just made me burst out with laughter! 10 all the way and I jope to read more!

yay you updated! Yaya I'm not in trouble anymore, stupid school. this is great, hope you don't get sent to iraq. bleh, who would want to live there?
Mel

aw this just gets cuter with every chapter! ahem ... rhian is adorable! she's just so, iono ... she cracks me up. i LOVE reading her thoughts, just 'cause she's so like me. heh, scary i know. that was an awesome chapter, and just hilarious. and i don't really think she broke the spell all that fast; i mean, it was hinging there for a long time. she did make him smile at, like, the first meeting. saw it coming! whee! yes, great writing, and NO don't get shipped off! not until you finish writing this, at least. yes, i know, ain't i considerate? D lol, keep writing!
k8

THE STORY IS SO CUTE! and sweet , i read it and loved it ..next chapter please ..keep up your great work

Aw, it's so cute!
And Rhian IS funny! *laughs* Leah, too. I'm looking forward to see more of her. Maybe she can get It off Rhian.

No NO NO you musent take it off! That would be a grave injutice to those of us that acctually have a sense of humor! I mean how hard is it to find a hurmorous story with a decent plot line these days! Near impossible I say! And your is even better, because it has a great plot line! And it is humorous to boot! Ah!
Okay I'm done now, just wanted you to know how I felt.

ha, this is great. I love it, but now, reading this took me so long that my dad is getting mad at me, hell, i'm failing english, i'm mad at me too! But still, it's tuesday, i don't want to study for vocab before i have to. what can i say, i'm a procrastinator.
Mel

haha it's always an awesome use of time, to write. of course, evil school teachers just can't seem to comprehend that their students might have lives outside of school. -_- it's such a difficult concept for them, i swear. ergh makes me so mad. anyways, yeah, great chapter! gavin is SWEET ahaha. i love the guy, hehe. and rhian just gets fresher with each chapter you write. the whole last part of this made me start laughing aloud. usually when people write those scenes where it's all argueing with inner voices and full of denial, it gets a little cliché. the way you approached it was just so funny, and it worked perfectly with your charaters. oh, and by the way, collin's a jerk, heh. i'm sure i don't need to say why. i don't like him. kill him off. D haha that was merely a suggestion! *innocent look* ... anyways, great writing here; keep it up! and if you have the time, could you do me a favour and check out something i've written? ) 'till next time, then
k8

this is hella good! u have to update soon. plesae im so addicated! please please!
peace

Can you say... CUTE? I love it! Well, the story, not "it" it.

Awesome story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Please update soon!

ROTFL! pc! that's a new one! i love Rhian, she's not even trying and doing what she doesn't want to, love the irony! MORE SOON PLEASE!