I skipped ahead to the end because, well, I couldn't really stomach reading all of it. The narration was... annoying. It was completely random at times, and contrary to popular belief, random isn't funny. Not to me, at least. Furthermore, the protagonist's thought process was convoluted and confusing; I had no idea WHY she did half the things she did. Annoying. And juvenile. It had a few good moments, but on the whole, I didn't like it.

Demon is awsome! Go horsies!

The rabbits took her brain, stuck on of their on inside to fill the gap, and the rabbit took over her mouth!

Poke! Poke! Poke! PC's are the worst! Chopping off hand is a very good idea.

LOL all over! This is a great story! Her personality is leaping off the page.

Wow. I could not put this down. Um... *Squeezes out a critique* Too much losing of one's memory. But maybe you could have had the story of how Gavin lost his memory before how Rhian did and put in a little romantic scene where both of them don't know about their former lives.I really loved this. Plus-some thank yous: sbasiba and tolda raba (russian and hebrew) Great story!

lol. this is such a quirky fic, but in a good way!

I think i still like KoT more, but this is a cute story in itself and i think i will enjoy reading it until the next installment of KoT!

Much love

jdl

bravo! what a wonderful story very VERY funny! _

ahhahahah i burst out laughing at the 'sound it out with me' part. ))

ahh...humor.

and i also love dry humor. ))

Oh oh oh! I want a mind reading horse! :D Aww this chapter is sad... I can just imagine the look of utter confusion on Gavins face.

OMG! THIS IS HILARIOUS! I love this story! :D

Yay! I finished another chapter! Haha, I've always loved Faeries, your cliffhanger did the job, I'm wondering who's Talin now. Oh yes, Demon being the godfather was a good twist, and the rabbit entrance was amusing :)

Ok, I know I'm not a good reviewer, but this is one of the few stories that keeps me reading even though I have other pressing things to do! :)

HE LAUGHED! But the spell won't be broken so quickly, right? Haha

Sweet! Love this! :)