Sweet! Love this! :)

haha, I can't remember how many times I smiled to myself while reading this, this is awesome:)

Love this! This is amazing! Haha, I'm so happy now, I shall read more when I have the time :)

Great chapter! :) I had a good laugh and it really made my day, thanks for putting this up, I'm on to more!

This is lovely! I like the light-hearted way you wrote this story and the random humour you successfully injected into the lines. I like the way you ended the chapter too:)

loved this chapter, laughing throughout.

Cute, I like it so far. Reminds me of the story of the Princess Who Never Laughed.

Great story but I hated the formatting. Please put your sentences into paragraphs T.T

this story is freaking amazing!

i love it!

it is so one of my faves!

def in my top 10

:D

can't wait to read the sequel!

...there is sequel right? please tell me there is!

omg! i'll ie if there isn't!

lols

i am totally gonna say it, "I KNEW IT! I KNEW HE WAS GAVIN! HAHAHAHA I WAS RIGHT FOR ONCE YAY!"

lols

that felt good to say

hahahaha

amzin story

love it to death

lols

can't wait to read on!

rotfl

ah hah! he laughed!

btw y isn't she happy about that?

hmm... I'm kinda confused

oh well!

amazing chapt!

luved it

Demon is awesome

lols

haha this is so awesome!

i luv it!

its hilarious!

can't wait to read the rest!

haha i liked it

its really funni

can't wait to see what happens!

I think the story would be better if you switched the POV of Gavin and Rhian every once in a while, or made another story like this one just in Gavins POV.

aw so sweet!

xx