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| aquamoon222 2005-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseThat was good, you showed the bad side of love in this poem. Very orignal! I really enjoyed this. I feel like this poem is telling a story. Very well written! |
| arbysauce93 2004-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. I like the idea of the tear, and that everyone will experience heartbreak. Very nice poem. Keep up the good work! |
| Unchained Soul 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuse"To be free in this world of love Is to be free in a world of hate" That line was... just... **gasp**.. stunning!! |