Ravaa's a bit too jealous of Traven and Sala... of course unless she knows what WE all know from Chosen... yes naughty Traven, but I still love him... I mean it is kind of gross, but hey, Sala is a very pretty girl... naughty naughty Traven!
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I love Traven! Yay! Kind of ironic how Rowan looks up to him so much in the beginning, and in Chosen.. well... you know what I mean.
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I don't like Mahtar. I don't know why. Maybe because he is mean to Traven, I LOVE TRAVEN!
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I'm trying to decide if I like Traven better or Bryn better (from Destiny's Pawns by LadyTremere)... they are both kind of naughty but yummy and nice at the same time! Is yummy a weird adjective? Does anyone understand me? (its not in a perverted sense)
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Me: Traven's a little, um, odd. Yeah that's it odd.
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Phoenix: Yeah well, if you ask me he's a *coughpervertcough*.
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Me: I like Mathar, he's the perfect father. Caring, stern, protective, but willing to make Rowan happy.
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Phoenix: Yeah. Anyway, I WANT RAVENPIRATE TO UPDATE! I'M SICK OF WAITING!
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Me: No whining or you get a timeout.
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Phoenix: Like that's going to work...
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Me: A timeout with the Telletubbies in person! *DUM DUM DUM*
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Phoenix: NO! WATCHING TELLETUBBIES IS BAD ENOUGH!
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Me: Shut up dude, just shut up. ANYWAY! Hope you update your sequal and prequals soon. Great chapter...
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Phoenix: Great story...
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Both: CONTINUE PLEASE!

I would consider Ravaa's jealousy unreasonable if I didn't know what I already know about Traven's feelings for his sister.
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It's kinda sad that Rowan idolized Traven so much when he was a kid.

Yes, Traven is naughty. Bad Traven. And I love little Rowan! To think, he only gets hotter as he grows...

ooh, bad Traven! but i'm lovin' it! how can i not love my dearest Traven? i don't approve of the whole incest thing, but whatever floats his boat! lol. anyway, this was a realyl awesome first chapter. i enjoyed it! and Rowan sounds so cute. he he he, i love his as a little kid. update soon!! ^_^

All: ... ew...
Aya: *sighs* I know how Sala feels.
Lucifer: *twitch* That's... disturbing.
Hikari: *cuddling a Kiran plushie* Rowan's father is cool! *gives thumbs up* I still hate Ravaa. *glares and snuggles her plushie* Mine!
Dimmi: Cool chapter!

Oo! Traven! Hot Traven! Woo hoo! Poor Sala! Mahtar seems so amazingly cool!! O! I LOVE HIM ALREADY! Rowan is so cute! And Ravaa doesn't seem that bad! Woah! Cool story so far! Update soon!