You read some of mine, I always feel obligated to do the same for those who read my work.
This is a sweet song, very sweet. I see the pain, but there beyond that sits the massive glory behind all sadness.
You showed the frustration in contradiction well, it was beautifully written.
Please come back to read more of my work, I love feedback as the rest of us writers do. Tell others about me and I'll do the same for you.

I love your lyrics! This is so beautiful, and I feel like I can relate to it.

Breath-taking. Great job, I really enjoy your works and I hope you will continue posting things.

Really nice! I'm adding this to my faves list!

Very pretty, very beautiful in a kind of heartbreaking way because the suffering is clear too, very pretty and fragile. I like the metaphor of the butterfly wrapped in the cocoon and the broken wings, and how at the end, even with broken wings, even with all the pain, the butterfly can still fly. I'm not very good at being philosophical, but there's obviously a deep meaning to this poem and just to say I liked it!

wow...that is so amazing and beautiful...wow...

This is beautifuly written.

Very good..I liked it a lot.