good.
Danny.
p.s. my mini rant was meant to be mini.

i think the ending kinda died there. i really liked where it was going, what it was saying, cuz i feel the same way about one of my friends. i think the ending tho is not as good as the rest. now tell me if i am somehow mistaken, but i think the end strayed from the original point. it was good tho.

GREAT. do I know them?
wait . . . AM I them?
that'd be kinda scary.
Oh! the exit door is over by the flashing light!
see it?
it goes on and off, on and off, on and off . . .
::goes on for a while::
*sigh* so easily amused.

Haha, I like this 'cause it has attitude and I know people like the girl you seem to be describing.

Like this, poem born out of emotions are always better :) Like the last line as well, something slightly amusing about it in a good way! Well done keep writing

"Dot, dot,dot."
Wow...
Um... do I know this person?
Anyway, nice job in getting peoples to understand how you feel.
(next time, I swear, just yell at her!)
>__