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| Pyreflei 2006-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseNot bad... Certainly cute, there's no other way to describe it. I like this Vincent of yours; I know foster kids, and though some of them may put up all sorts of frightening barriers, they're really sweet and just testing the loyalty of the attention you're paying them. He's written well.~Ciao |
| dex2468 2005-06-26 ch 11, | abuseWow! So good! |
| Evilmiko21 2005-02-09 ch 1, | abuseLUV IT! GAY GUYS RULE! |
| Lia Star 2004-12-02 ch 11, | abuseI Love this story! Please, update soon so I can continue to read it. Also, check out my stories. I just posted them. Thankies!! |
| I am no longer writing 2004-08-30 ch 11, | abuseAmazing. I'm sorta upset that Dominic died... I liked him! ::sniffle:: anyway, I liked the chapter even if Ben and Vincent didn't reconcile yet.. Hopefully they will, but if not, that's peachy too. ::hugs to all:: Keep writing ^^ |
| Pineapple Chiffon Cake 2004-08-28 ch 11, | abuseMeh, and I was just starting to like Dominic too ^^;; I love the last segment with Vincent's thoughts. "...then shouldn't we all be dead?" It puts a new perspective to what justice is. This chapter started off from the same turbulence as the ending of the last chapter, but then mellowed out in the middle, then reminded us of the title of the chapter in the last bit of the plot. Very nicely done ^_^ Update soon! |
| Zienna 2004-08-28 ch 11, | abuseyou're so crazy =P why did Dom had to die =| thyere was no reason... and that piece at the end, was that a letter from Vi? or what? you're leaving me confused here... |
| yukomi 2004-08-28 ch 11, | abuseyay vincent! *cheers* i never thought i'd say this, but im actually upset that dominic died. you made me like him! >< keep writing. and get vincent and benjamin back together soon. they make me sad when they're apart. *cries* |
| Sheepie 2004-08-27 ch 11, | abuseWow... good chap. I liked the ending. Shocker. -=smacks Ben=- I don't like him much anymore... hurt vincent. Da dick. Lol. I really liked the chap, very dramatic. ^.^ Twas great! |
| Darkladyknight 2004-08-27 ch 11, | abuseOMG, that was good. Kind of sad, i feel bad things between Vincent and Ben went bad. But all in all its really great story. Vincent must have freaked that Dominic was killed, that was kind of freaky, but as i said great story still. |
| Shinigami Angel of Death 2004-08-25 ch 10, | abuseLol you can always expect the best yaoi and shonen-ai stories to come from the actual yaoi bois (as in gay guys if you didnt get that though i hardly doubt it) Love it keep updating!! =^^= |
| kuro no ame 2004-08-18 ch 10, | abuseThis is one of the only two supernaturalish(I don't think that's a word, but I couldn't thing of anything else!) stories that I like. I can't wait for the next chapter! ;) |
| kitty 2004-08-17 ch 8, anon. | abusehey i really like your story i hope you write more then just ten chapters. -kitty- |
| yukomi 2004-08-12 ch 10, | abuseoy. you must finish. i love all your stories ^.^ i get so drawn in. and im so happy jon and nathan got together! *cheers* so yes. please continue. |
| jepi 2004-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe *blush* ack this chapter was so cute! vincent's so closed off *sigh i wonder where this is going to go..hmm well i'll keep reading ^^ |