very nice i'm intregued as to how this will turn out...and i couldn't help but to laugh when the grandmother said "you got it" i can't really see my g-ma actually saying that but if she did i'd definately BoL...gudd jorb i like...C4N >^.^< baka neko
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nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!