I just want you to know that this review will have positive and negative stuff in it, so you have the choice to read it or not.First off, your story is actually pretty good. I like the characters, especially Caroline. She is well developed and you can actually feel what she is feeling. I like how you take the time to describe her thoughts.However, your are in dire need of a spell and grammar check. A good story can be hindered if there are too many errors in those two areas. I found myself having to repeat several sentences to fully understand what you were trying to say. Be careful of that. Also, the chapter when Caroline was drunk and then suddenly she is in college was very very confusing. You should have wrote an author's note or something, so the reader could have prepared themselves for the leaps in time. But, like I said, altogether, you have a great story and I hope you continue it. Good luck meelah

I like it

a bit confusaing, but thats what i like about this story, it makes sense in the end, or you make it make sense. This is a really interesting story, write more soon!

Hey.. This was a great chapter. It feels so real and I can see the characters in my head. Great job KJ keep it up. ~Kenya~

I have been way behind on my reading lol. I love this story. I was alittle confused when she was drunk it was jumping her drinking to her talking to the guy about her problems. I still love it, thought. Update soon
love ya

please continue. i would like to read more of this what happens and how it will happen. i'm so confusing...myself. Anyway please update soon.

Lol Peer pressure the killer of all lol well same with seeing boys beg heh heh heh ~Kenya~

Aw so sweet! I am glad she has a friend. ~Kenya~

This is a good chapter. I can kinda relate to the main character. ~Kenya~

this was well written you are a good author. I am going to continue to read :) ~Kenya~

Hey! ok I know I said I was goign to be doing my paper...I SO am! Ok so I took a break! lol! Again, Great chapter! I really like how you wrote this! Way to go!
I need to catch up to you! lol! I should start writing an OF here soon. Still writing Faith centric fics, lol.
Ok, so, are we setting a date for out little engagement party? lmao! ;)
Keep up the great work! :)

wow, that was...kewl. Please update soon. I would like to know hwat happens. this is good...keep up the good work...kewl.

this is good...please continue. update soon.

nice Job. I really liked it. Update again soon.

Hey K! lol. See, finally got my account up and running! You're comment to me was hilarious. It's BYOB right? lol. Woohoo! Drunkeness! lol.
Anyway, this was a great chapter. You're doing pretty good! Now if only I could get MY ** in gear! lol! And yes, it does have wicked potential! ;)
anyway, keep it up! :)