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| Isle of View 2006-04-21 ch 1,  | abusei don't know why I never reviewed this in the past. why? because I really like it. As I read I can actually imagine this clown dancing in front of me. First he's funny and he makes jokes. and the line which hit me, is "when the show is over, I am left alone in the ring" it gives a really clear picture of desolation. and your last word is brilliant. It hits home instantly. the clown is dead. it's like the impact is really there. great work vicks. and I duly apologize for never having reviewed such a wonderful poem. :) |
| Savetheplanet 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really great piece of work, I especially like the last line. Good job~Savetheplanet :) |
| Lellida 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a powerful ending. The clown metaphor (though used often) is still a good one, and you kept it nicely through out the poem. The first lines and the formatting of the poem makes it strong- I like it. |
| daryl 2004-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the best poem I have ever read. I can relate to it so easily. I seriously like the last third verse. It's like damn beautiful but sad at the same time. Wow. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abusehehe its cute! i just despise clowns though so im not fond of this poem. but thats only because of my prejudices towards clowns... *shudders* clowns... anyways, it was cute tho |
| FrostedTeardrop 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh gosh. I can relate this poem really really well. I always try to hid my feeling by smiling and pretending that everything is fine. Great poem! Always keep writing~ |
| kelled 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abusehi, i feel as though i can really relate to your poem, i'm like that every day. hiding my sadness. sometimes i end up having to spill everything and get called happy go lucky - its just the way i am. i really enjoyed your poem. kepp writing! |