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| haha 2004-10-22 ch 5,  | nice chappie :-) |
| rikku-099 2004-09-29 ch 4,  | the most awesome short chapter ever :] |
| rikku-099 2004-09-21 ch 3, | "A thrilling read" said the three little pigs... ahaha just joking! AWESOME! Please update fast! I can't wait to read more! |
| Shary 2004-05-12 ch 1, | What have I left to say?? Previous reviewer has taken all words from me ^_~ I haven't had the time yet to read the 2 chappie, but I'm really anxious 'bout it!! As soon as I get home I'll read it!! Definitely! ~Shary~ BTW, could you check my piece of writing? It also has to do with elements ;) And I'm just starting, but check it out if you can! Thnx! :D |
| KidKourage 2004-04-09 ch 1, | O.O Darkness. Wow, AF, this is *amazing.* It's like...SO well written I could die. The attention to detail is great, and so descriptive I could feel the heat and the sand and the shadows and the fear and blood and wow. o_o Just wow. This is like *the* perfect opening chapter of a novel. The characters are introduced beautifully, their personalities are already coming forth, and the playfulness of the first half is shattered just wonderfully by the tension of the conclusion. SUSPENSE! You've really done a great job setting up the society and culture of your characters, as well. It's very believable and I can't wait to learn more about them. Plot. o.@ *hugs* You are the queen! My envy is boundless! ='D I'm so proud of you! ...now write more. u.u!! |