|Reviews for Under Your Shadow|
| InfiniteDreamer04 1/16/05 . chapter 1
This was really beautiful. Short poems say it all. Good job and thanks for the review. Well, off to read more of your work...
| A Beautiful Nightmare 5/5/04 . chapter 1
It sounds like the night covering day... I really like this one of all the ones I read so far... good job...
| Cirien Phoenix 4/17/04 . chapter 1
I really like this. I think this is very good and it shows perfectly what it's like to be in someone else's shadow (I don't have an older sibling, so I wouldn't know about that specifically.) You did a very good job with this.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you very much for the review on Confused Little Girl.
| BLOUWHO 4/12/04 . chapter 1
hey i really like this poem keep up the good work
| Nestalgica 4/10/04 . chapter 1
A lot of power can be put into a few sound words. You chose the words that would hold power in the poetry very well. You get whipped cream _
Thanks a lot for reveiwing my two stories - i think Death Imported stinks, but i'm working on DragonChild _
| William Ironclad 4/10/04 . chapter 1
Oh, cool. This is very good. Powerful. I love it. Sad, though. You shouldn't feel like you are in your sister's shadow. Does she write as well as you do?
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
| jsullins 4/10/04 . chapter 1
I quite liked this one. I can't really relate to it, but I can sympathize all the same. I think the first part was best, the second seemed to dwindle a little bit in the idea. But all in all, it was lovely. Accurate syllable count. Good job!
-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-
| Endless Nightmares 4/10/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful haiku. It has a dark essence about it. Good job.
| Wasted Postage 4/10/04 . chapter 1
You know, you did a very good job of dramatically changing the mood of the whole poem with your second stanza. The first stanza was all bright and beautiful, and the second was so hopeless.