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| AmorphousHeart 2007-08-16 ch 43, | abuseYay! I just sat down and read every single chapter of this story in about one hour. Praise be to me. lol. But yes...I really like it, I just wish that it was more focused on Sasha/Danny cuz I love them so much. *huggles* I have a thing for best friends falling in love. :) |
| Chris-no-Baka 2007-08-01 ch 43, | abuseYou're right, boys are funny XD. thats why i love em so much lol. this was a cute chapter, sasha is definitely myt favorite character, (did i say that already?) and then Xin and David are after that. :) Yay cute couples! |
| Kizuna 2007-07-26 ch 43, | abuseGood update!;) Sasha and Xin talking, and Sasha seeing that Xin really likes David!:D Can't wait till the next update, when Danny comes back!;) Yeah, I have some faith in Brian... I just hope he doesn't break any of the two cute couples apart...;) Both Sasha/Danny and Xin/David are meant to be, if you ask me!;) |
| Midnights Scream 2007-07-25 ch 43, | abuseLOL. Sascha makes me laugh and I'm surprised he thought the same thing David did. :) it's good! |
| Love Eternally 2007-07-24 ch 43, | abuseAwe. I love Sasha in this one. he's so open, its great. Poor xin, that would be embarrassing. |
| Midnights Scream 2007-07-18 ch 42, | abuseLOL. Thanks for explaining about the friedns and Brian is creeping me out in this chapter. Who's he trying to protect from those two David and and Danny? Is he just protecting Danny and trying to make David's life hell? So many mysteries, but love it anyway. |
| Chris-no-Baka 2007-07-17 ch 42, | abuseI was beginning to thin that Brian was going to turn out as a good guy, but apparently not. i can ttoally see that he has something to do and that it's not going to be good. and i suppose you can't answer this, but do i sense that whatever it is is going to directly involve sasha and danny? |
| Kizuna 2007-07-17 ch 42, | abuseHaha, Brian is so evil!;) Will Sasha confront Xin about the fact that he was at David's place in the next chapter?;) I'm glad to hear that Danny's coming back soon!;) I'm hoping for some sweet moments with him and Sasha? I wonder who else will be there to comfort him...? And I also hope for some more sweet moments between Xin and David!;) I really like those too together! Though you must already know that...;) |
| Moonlite-Chaos 2007-07-16 ch 42, | abuseOh. Interesting. I like how this was in brian's pov. It gives a little more in depth about him I think. (Though, I still don't really like him, which is sad seeing as my favorite cousin's name just happens to be brian...)I simply can't wait to read the next chapter. I almost cried when the words "Danny's Mom died last night" regestered in my brain. Maybe I'm just over emotional today? I saw you're other two stories and I'm gonna read them too, just cuz they look like I something I should read cuz they seem like I'll totally get the whole picture. I will right? Right? Great chapter! Can't wait fo the update! |
| Love Eternally 2007-07-15 ch 42, | abusei dont like brian |
| Moonlite-Chaos 2007-07-04 ch 41, | abuseGAH! It took me forever to read this, but, Wow. Just wow. Its extreamly well written and I was addicted to it from the beginning. (Which happened to be like, three days ago...m, additions) ANYWAY! I can't wait for the update and uhh...yeah. (Not very smart but I never claimed to be.) Um, now. This story, Not a lot has happened from where we began. And I think the only reason I'm hooked is because I haven't figured out what the hell happened in Xin's past! I mean, I get the general jest of it, but I WANT THE FULL BLOWN DETAILS!! And no doubt, once I get them (if I ever do *glare*) I'll probably bawl my eyes out. Wow, this is a long review. But I just gotta say, I hope it picks up a bit more speed. Such as, I don't know, A steamy hott lemon. A little more revealed about my favorite Charactor, Sasha. Or Umm...North and Chance showing up. Or uh...just more! I have all these damn demanding questions in my brain about what's gonna happen and it's driving me crazy. But then again, not having Caffiene at least once a day drives me crazy too but that's just me. ANYWAY after me dragging on >.> Let me just say: HURRY UP AND UPDATE PLEASE! No Preassure though ^.^ |
| Midnights Scream 2007-07-02 ch 41, | abuse:) Xin is sweet yet when are his friends going to pop up? I thought they were suppose to visit him sometime. And wow! we haven't heard from Danny in a long time, but I'm glad he'll be back soon. |
| Kizuna 2007-07-01 ch 41, | abuseNice chapter!:D Xin and David are so cute together!;) And Danny was in here too! That means he's coming back right? Sad that his mother is dead, though... But now Sasha can comfort him!;) |
| Love Eternally 2007-06-28 ch 41, | abuseAwe. That's incredibly cute. that's xin helping him isn't it? |
| a.k. 2007-06-28 ch 40, anon. | abuseMakeshift Wings |