is really powerful piece, and I can feel your emotions through the words. It was an immensely terrible tragedy that I think your poem did justice to. Believe me, if I wasn't here at school right now, I would cry to. Thank you very much for writing this.

I was entranced by the first line. great poetry.

gosh. wow. That's amazing... I'm still teary, and I've been sitting here for ten minutes trying to gather my thoughts. Amazing.

That has always been the lesson of history, and has worked both ways. By posting this kind of work you ensure that people will never forget the holocaust or worse, repeat it. Very touching, Keep up the good work.

Oh my Gosh... Thats deep. Sorry im still in shock.

Never...never ever again. SUch sorrow, such pain of the past. ALways wondering how anyone could let hate go so far. Wishing we could be there to help. Sad, yet touching poem.
Hawke

I love this poem, it's very heartfelt and touching.

sweet!

Never again, if we can be conscious enough to stop an evil like that before it happens again. The only thing you can do besides that is use the grat talent you have here to honor those that were lost. I really can't find anything here that I would tihnk you might want to fix, this poem is really great.

much much much better! i like this one lots!