Yes, nice imagery. While the "overhead" and "head" in the 2-3 lines seems awkward at first, as soon as you read the 4 it doesn't feel like it should rhyme anymore. So either way, nice job.

i like this... short but nice imagery.
perhaps change the second and third lines; having "overhead" and "head" right after each other is confusing, because it seems like you're going to make the rest of the poem rhyme as well.
all in all, nice job.
~Willow