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| Kazoshi 2007-01-20 ch 1,  | abuseHmm...very nice. Confusing at first but I got over it ^^ |
| Oki3xDoki3 2006-06-19 ch 6, | abuseOmg, me likes!! This is soo effen cute! I love Leon! Through out the whole thing i grinned and my face was plastered to the screen! eheeheheh. Much ♥ cant wait till next chappy! I got my eye on u! |
| Neji's Soulmate 2006-03-08 ch 6, anon. | abuseum... has this story been abandoned? Please say no. So far I'm liking Leon more and more although I thought he was a bastard to poor Alex in the beginning. Yay, Alex now has a protector, wonder how Gene-boy will take that. *evil laugh* Anyway please continue, good story |
| chinotto 2006-01-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseok.. i reviewed the last chapter before this one. and.. also before i read it. BUT! aww... gene is an **. but probably has some form(s) of childhood trauma.. lol. i had the oddest thought.. gene calling leon "daddy". my god. that's terrible :P ugh! college... do you mean highschool or university? i always get confused with that. gah. either way, this fic is awesome. gonna check out all your other ones now :D *pop* |
| chinotto 2006-01-08 ch 6, anon. | abuse*smile* *smile* *controls salivatory glands* |
| Prisoner-11 2005-11-23 ch 6, | abuseOhh... Need more of this... So cute! I want those pics the fangirls took! |
| Sporkess 2005-11-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, this story is good. I looked at your summary thing at the very beginning and thinking, "this really doesn't bode well", but I enjoyed the story a lot. I'm very intrigued by Alex's presumably traumatic past. Update soon? |
| Lidyah 2005-09-19 ch 4, | abuseYou shouldn't add your author's note at the end of a chapter. I'm loving this :) |
| Lidyah 2005-09-19 ch 3, | abuseSo who is Leann to Alex? I like Leon he's so cool. lol |
| Lidyah 2005-09-19 ch 2, | abuseI'm guessing that maybe Leon is an older guy here. I am still very confused, which this time isn't so good, because I have no idea what is happening. We'll see |
| Lidyah 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseo, that was hot. What is going on here. Majorly confused but a good kind. Update soon =) |
| Kazumi Kairi or Kairi-chan 2005-06-30 ch 6, | abuseFinally after all these months you've finally updated your 6th chapter of this greatest story of yours. I just loved the way you wrote this shounen ai. ^^ Keep it up! I'm getting too excited to know what's going to happen next. X3 |
| Painted Desert 2005-02-02 ch 5, | abusei like it! keep writing! |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-01-22 ch 3, | abuseIt was a little shaky the first two chapters. It seemed like you were experimenting with them. But the last three chapters turned out pretty well. I'll add this to my favorites list so i can keep checking on the storie. ^^ |
| Nieni Springs 2004-12-13 ch 5, | abuseNite: hey look, a story. *points* Nieni: *nods* yep. there should be more stories in the world. Nite: yep. Nieni: yep. Nite:... Nieni:... Nite: Yea, but this one's actually good. Nieni: So is pizza. Good like pizza. Nite: Yep. Nieni: I wouls like to dedicate this nummy pizza to all the good stories in the world- namely this one. Nite: The pizza? Nieni: Yea, the pizza. Nite: You're dedicating the pizza to itself? Nieni: NO! Nite: You just said- Nieni: YOU WEREN'T LISTENING TO A SINGLE WORD I SAID, WERE YOU! Nite:... I heard the word pizza and stories and- and- and now I'm confuzzled. Nieni: Me too. Hey, look! A story! Nieni: *nods* yep. there should be more stories in the world. Nieni: Yep. Nite: What time is it? Nieni: IT'S SQUISHY TIME! *pulls out plushies and does the happy sloth dance* Nite: NO! (an original review from "Nieni Springs and Company" Have a pleasant day.) |