|Reviews for Dances with Demons|
| from beneath the bell jar 11/15/05 . chapter 1
Great last stanza - the way it sums it up and gives it such a finality. Anyway, interesting poem. GREAT title!
P.S. Thanks so much for the review!
| Artemis Darkclaw 11/29/04 . chapter 1
interesting...very interesting. I like it. wonderful imagery and interesting title. you can really feel the competitiveness between them.
| Pocket Protectors are Sexy 8/21/04 . chapter 1
I like this a lot for some reason. I'm getting a deeper meaning I can't explain. Hmm...anyway, keep up the good work!
And thanks for already reviewing my newest story "The Morgue Chronicles."
| IHJ 6/16/04 . chapter 1
Darn. They couldn't find the server after the first review.
There's this irony between the title and the content of this poem, particularly the last line, that I like. Same goes for the use of vocabularly especially in the second stanza to show you trying to one-up your friend. Well-written and structured; good poem.
| philoslove 6/12/04 . chapter 1
Brilliant work. It's quite powerful too, I like the way you portray the competition.
| FigureItOut 4/14/04 . chapter 1
very cool; kudos to you, I like it
| Georgie Pantazis 4/10/04 . chapter 1
Nice imagery and structure. I like the theme you chose too... the constant struggle between two friends always in competition whether they know of it or not. Nice.
| trisket-n-gunther 4/10/04 . chapter 1
nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!
| simpleplan13 4/10/04 . chapter 1
i like it... nice imagery... i like the second stanza a lot... great job
| Blondeggman 4/10/04 . chapter 1
whos this about? another good poem by lindzoid