Great last stanza - the way it sums it up and gives it such a finality. Anyway, interesting poem. GREAT title!

P.S. Thanks so much for the review!

interesting...very interesting. I like it. wonderful imagery and interesting title. you can really feel the competitiveness between them.

I like this a lot for some reason. I'm getting a deeper meaning I can't explain. Hmm...anyway, keep up the good work!
And thanks for already reviewing my newest story "The Morgue Chronicles."
PPAS!

Darn. They couldn't find the server after the first review.
There's this irony between the title and the content of this poem, particularly the last line, that I like. Same goes for the use of vocabularly especially in the second stanza to show you trying to one-up your friend. Well-written and structured; good poem.
Izzy J.

Brilliant work. It's quite powerful too, I like the way you portray the competition.

very cool; kudos to you, I like it

Nice imagery and structure. I like the theme you chose too... the constant struggle between two friends always in competition whether they know of it or not. Nice.

nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!

i like it... nice imagery... i like the second stanza a lot... great job

whos this about? another good poem by lindzoid