Some of it a like, some of it I don't. It just seems like your a bit of a young writer, not that tahts always a bad thing.
The only major flaw I can see is that maybe the word 'you' shouldn't be used so much, I know that this poem is addressing someone but I think that maybe you can use some other terms.
I still like it though, I think that with a little editing this could really be something special.
I like the sunrise imagery though, we all have our own little sunrises, this made me think of mine, thats probably why I liked it so much.
I almost forgot to mention, another strong point about your poem is that I think people will find it easy to relate to. That is definitly a challenge for a lot of writers. Good job.
Would you mind taking a peek at my work if you got a second? I'd really appreciate it.

nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!

not bad, you clearly show your fellings in this poem, and most of all you show your fear, which is one of two of the strongest emotions shown here. Beautiful!