this is really good...i like the way you decribe everyithing and i like the way you set up the plot and the characters...keep it up ^^

A little confusing, but very good! You're a such a good author wow!! I really like this story, can't wait to see what happens next!

I thought it was fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. Update! Soon! Now!

nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!