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| shes toxic 2004-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseI'm gunna go out on a limb here and guess that you're a cutter . I'm too much of a whimp to put any of my cutting poems on here . . . I guess even a freak like me still cares what people think a little . But I really like this , and all your poetry really . - Shattered |
| maybeXtomorrow 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abusethis sounds like and "in the moment" poem. like one you wrote at the time you felt the emotion. i like it. very strong. -Amy |
| f5chica 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseYup, that's pretty much what I feel like when I'm wanting to cut. |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseCould have used a bit more emotion but it was good. It felt a bit flat to me because anyone can say "I want to feel again. I used to cut myself." But many of the people don't really mean it. I still think that this was alright though. Especially the line "cutting the numbness away". And thank you so much for the review of my poem. I was very happy. |
| Wren Craven 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abusemy life...my very existence has been recorded in your piece...wonderful, beautiful...the only reason i say cutting is an old habit is so as to sway any suspicion should my friends come across this site...actually, i don't have friends...so what does it matter? i read your bio, and the only difference i found in our hates is the first one...God...i won't preach, i just found that we have a lot of the same hates...skinny chicks and posers and preps need to die...actually, so does hilary duff...*reaches for the scissors* chloe |
| finally-defeated 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abusecutting i dunno if it's all sucha good thing...*searing by the way i think that's what ur going for lol sorry, bad habit, but ya, goodjob i guess, thnx for reviewing -fd-am9 |