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| Unchained Soul 2004-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseWow this is so powerful... tell your friend I'm absolutely diggin this. I love how the lines are so positive and negative both at the same time "forcing the direction sought... our heaven's don't come cheap." amazing contrasts in this one. |
| kalariah 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is extremely thought-provocative, making the reader contemplate what it is that is really important. Heaven in any form is not cheap; that's definitely right. Tell your friend I said I totally like this! :D And thanks for the word check on my poem; I seriously never noticed it, and it's not something spell check would pick up on. I'll be changing it as soon as I'm back on my own computer. |