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| bahaghari 2006-05-03 ch 6, | abuseTouching and inspiring. Thanks for the reviews too. It means a lot. |
| bahaghari 2006-05-03 ch 5, | abuseYes, "Love conquers everything." I agree. |
| bahaghari 2006-05-03 ch 4, | abuseThe way you put the imagery seems all too surreal, but it blows me away at the same time. It's these lines that made me say that:"If blue is consumed, it makes you like the ocean and tastes like your dreams The ocean is wavy and mysterious like the taste of blue melting in your mouth and not in your hand Finally, to touch Blue all you must do is open wide and taste the sky which tastes like a newborn baby" |
| bahaghari 2006-05-03 ch 2, | abuseThis one is nice. It says so much about no one is an expert at being alone. It's a subtle reminder too that we're not alone in this life. If the reader is imaginative, the line, "If you have problems don't let it double/Come to me and I'll help you" sounds as if it's coming from Christ. It's a nice read... simple but has a positive energy for its readers. |
| bahaghari 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI love roses too. It has a calming effect and always pretty to look at. It's really nice that you incorporated what the flower means... it's sort of getting a rose from you through this poem. |