|Reviews for MODERN ALICE|
| Soul's Eclipse 11/25/05 . chapter 20
So sad this chappie...please update!
| Hell's first Icicle 11/25/05 . chapter 20
WHAT? this is the ending? but...but...*splutters* they're not together? in the epilogue... they can't get together in the EPILOGUE? so dus that mean they wunt get together? at all? *sobs*
| CrystalDusk 11/25/05 . chapter 20
oh no... i like immature just fine. in stories anyway. in real life however male maturity i completely agree with you is way too rare. this chapter so angsty and unhappy...and yes if you end it like this i'll probably kill you. umm does she leave for america or something at the end? because that really sucks...especially if you leave it that way. now please make him go to america and track her down...this alice bleu thing needa a nice holiday anyway. how about EVERYONE go to america? D
| xbluxmoonx 11/24/05 . chapter 20
Aww, you updated! So sad, really hope you update soon! Great chapter, by the way!
| Ridley Jack 11/24/05 . chapter 20
Oh, cliffy!I wanna know what the note said! Her brother's coming home, right? But why is Riku all, well, like he was?
| punkispurple 11/24/05 . chapter 20
Ok I know this was a really angsty chapterbut still thank you for cheering me up (I've had a bad day) so coming home and checking my email to find this was updated made me smile... and aw Aruisu's left *cries* she has to get together with riku damnit *cries again* but still you freaking rock
| A Tree 11/24/05 . chapter 20
I love you, you know that, right? This is such a wonderful, heart wrenching story.
I'm looking forward to the final installment.
Now excuse me while I go cry my eyes out.
| with a flourish 11/24/05 . chapter 20
Yay! You updated! *blows party horn* High School's the pits, ain't it? Update soon, and I can't wait for your next story! n_n
| yasuyasu 11/24/05 . chapter 20
Oh you finally updated! I like angst... but this chapter seems a little over the top. Eh, but nvm. Riku has problems. XD
| Paliana 11/23/05 . chapter 20
OMG ... Arisu left for America to her brother didn't she? I practically skimmed this chapter, but I tried to pay attention to details. I mean, why else would someone get so angry (which I'm guessing is Riku). Look what came of their relationship. T_T I know Arisu has family, but she should think of herself! She thought about Riku ... she could have made one last stop before just leaving. But if I'm taking this chapter the wrong way, forget what I'm saying. xD I had a little water in my eyes ... I've been having a tear-jerking day.
I can't wait for the conclusion! Thanks for updating, btw! :3
| MoriMorte 11/23/05 . chapter 20
awsome chpt. though i hope there's a few more chpts. left to it.
and you really should consider publishing it it's worthy of it it's the best i've seen it's my favorite story!
oh and don't worry about reviewing plus i started on another story "angel of death" my other one got really hard to write because it's me writing about my past ,well some of it though and it's just harder to keep writing it.
anyways again your story is so awsome and i'm so happy you finally updated it!
i wish u luck on your writing and please update again soon!
| stargazer starluver 11/22/05 . chapter 19
you have to UPDATE! i'm positively bawling here! im crying so much my throat hurts. it's very well-written. i do hope you won't leave us with a cliffhanger like that next time!
| sakurazuki 11/14/05 . chapter 5
hey.. pretty nice story you got here.. jrock bishies in manga stories are the best hehe.. keep up the good work..
it was rather surprising when i found out the girl kiley liked was named hitomi... prolly cause that's my name too.. hehe..
| Connie 11/14/05 . chapter 19
Wonderful chapter, as always.
Good job and keep up the good work!
and update please! -
| Pyro Fang 11/10/05 . chapter 19
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. ...OR ELSE. I've got a spork, and i'm not afraid to use it.. Have a nice day! XD J/k. Update! I loved the story so far. If you don't update soon, I might go insane...er...