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| Dartxni 2005-03-18 ch 3, | abuseI like your style. I'm going to have to read more of your stuff. |
| chocolatecreme06 2004-05-17 ch 3, | abuseO interesting, can't wait to see more |
| Amara Samul 2004-05-15 ch 3, | abuseOh... I really like this so far! Keep it up! ^.~ Ryo-san |
| Kylie Wegtar 2004-05-15 ch 3, | abuse*excellent* |
| WarriorHeart 2004-05-15 ch 3, | abuseThe dimension you are giving this story is incredible. I love reading/learning about the characters, you make the story seem to flow seemlessly. It is almost like watching a movie, you use enough detail, but better than that because there is enough left out and we can imagine. Oh, I also wanted to say, thank you for the sarcasm and ironic statements. |
| chocolatecreme06 2004-04-13 ch 2, | abuseI think this story is moving on pretty nicely. Wonder who he stumbled into on the way back to the table |
| WarriorHeart 2004-04-13 ch 2, | abuseI was not disappointed in the second chapter at all. You had some great descriptions in thereand the story is progressing nicely. And thanks so much for that last cliff hanger line, *sarcastically* I really appreciated it. |
| WarriorHeart 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseLOL. This is good so far. Update soon! |
| Kylie Wegtar 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseokay - i luv it so far. how old R u? this is really good - i can't make say anything bad xcept that i want the rest of it. :) -Ky |
| chocolatecreme06 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHm...sounds pretty interesting so far. I'd like to see where it heads. Ciao ~CC |