Interesting beginning, this is all the reading i have in me for tonight. I will write a more detailed review once i finish with what is posted, but for now i'll leave you with the fact that i am looking forward to finishing this.

Hello SFG,
I am liking this so far. I read the first chapter. I like the names! espcecially Je'graa and Xziak.
I'll get to more soon :)

an intriguing concept, though i think the writing needs to be improved a bit.

~Militarynut32489

only one way to describe this: wierd but interesting.

~Militarynut32489

Hi! I'm not much of a reviewer, but I thought I'd stop by and say that it was an enjoyable read and I hope you'll add onto it soon.
You say that your original file format was .doc, was it made by MS Word? I find that if I convert my Word document to Rich Text Format, then convert the .rtf file to .html using the program found at http://w.ireksoftware.com/RTFtoHTML, I can retain a lot of my formating. Usually I do a last bit of HTML code cleanup before I upload. Maybe that will help.

R'zor of the Wind, thanks for your review. A reason for the rebellion comes in the next chapter, I know i should have updated with that chapter, sry bout that :)

cool, not bad
Was the gap between chapters months? because alot seemed to happen between chapters, and Maybe a reason for the rebelion of the Jurranians
all in all, good
if you can read my sci-fi's, most are only one chapter but I'll work on that
Reza Kaze
R'zor of the Wind

Hey thx :) I love it when I get reviews...and especially ones that help me out. I'll try to proofread more often.

Not bad. You really have to proofread your story though :/, there's a relatively large amount of spelling mistakes (emphasis on "relatively"). Despite that, the story itself is excellent, imaginative and a few other good things that I can't come up with the words for at 11PM :/. Good work!

Thanks Angie :) Im glad to see that people continue to read my story. Thx bout the error, I really gotta read it before I post it. My document was a doc file. I dunno how it worked, but I din't do a double space, that's it :) Cool, can't wait to see your writings when they come about. Oh, SilverEclipse made me a very cool sig! I love it, it's really cool. Of course, you can see it back at the guild. I have the next 2 chapters written for this story, but not typed yet and I wont have time this weekend either :( I also have a sequel to Dream State too, but that too is not typed. I'll try my best to get it in ASAP, but school's been rough :) Well thx again for the review!...now I think I'm rambling, lol

Still great. You have talent. ^_^ By the way, at one spot you spelling sending snding. Just thought I'd let ya know. I have a question. How did you get it to not have an extra space in between paragraphs? Mine is always automatically double-spaced. What format is it (html, txt, doc...)? Anyway, I don't have any other work like Time of Peace, but I may soon because I'm probably taking an advanced english class that makes you write a lot next year so I may have to do it for a grade or something (I hope so). Whoa, long sentence. :P Am I rambling? Yeah, I'll stop now. Anyway, good luck! ^_^
~Angie~

I like it. I've recently started to get into sci-fi a bit more than I used to. Don't forget to proofread before you upload chapters because I saw some mistakes. Please continue it. ^_^ ~ Angie, from Young Writers Guild