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Reviews For: The Tale of Corruption

Alise Devay
2004-08-04
ch 1,
abuseI love your rhymes! And the way your words sound together. This is truly awesome writing!
cosmo-queen
2004-04-15
ch 1,
abuseA very original portrayal of corruption. I especially love all the images you have used. Great work :)
*cosmo-queen*
do not resuscitate
2004-04-14
ch 1,
abusethis was very good. the rhyming was wonderful. great job!
aqua-angel
2004-04-13
ch 1,
abuseI like it ^-^ LOTR rox! Uh... I'm not that great at analyzing poetry and I got a little lost in the middle. My favorite line tho is "A simple song the mockingbird mocks". I like the beginning tho, I picture a war about to start and the sun slowly rising... *cough* anyway, great job
Rose of Darkness 666
2004-04-13
ch 1,
abuseVery nice! (Thanx for the reviews BTW ^_^) This is great!!
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