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| Alise Devay 2004-08-04 ch 1, | abuseI love your rhymes! And the way your words sound together. This is truly awesome writing! |
| cosmo-queen 2004-04-15 ch 1, | abuseA very original portrayal of corruption. I especially love all the images you have used. Great work :) *cosmo-queen* |
| do not resuscitate 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abusethis was very good. the rhyming was wonderful. great job! |
| aqua-angel 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it ^-^ LOTR rox! Uh... I'm not that great at analyzing poetry and I got a little lost in the middle. My favorite line tho is "A simple song the mockingbird mocks". I like the beginning tho, I picture a war about to start and the sun slowly rising... *cough* anyway, great job |
| Rose of Darkness 666 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! (Thanx for the reviews BTW ^_^) This is great!! |