haha so adorable. very nice!

Unfolds as a little unicorn. Well done. m

Very cute. =^n-n^= How do you come up with such beautiful poetry !? X3

~ Noelle ~

twas a cute poem ^ ^ strong and descriptive words used.

Very nice. Wonderfully done!

I love this! ^^; Even though it's not Easter anymore, it's still an awesome poem. ::cookie:: Good job. Your poem's awesome.
-Euro-=-

Hehe...its so cute! ^_^
L:BVR x

Yayness! Happy (late, I'm sorry!) Easter to you too! I love this - its beautiful!
~ CoolBeans18s

My favorite lines were "poems scribbled on/
so many paper petals"

*smiles uncontrollably* aw! i absolutely loved that, it was positively happiness-inducing, hehe. ;P "origami hearts/unfold in neat precision" ~ such a fantastic image. awesome tanka, chica! you rock! ! ! :D

And to you too, my friend.

Lovely little haiku there. I really enjoyed it. It's a gorgeous day today, so it really fit the atmosphere. Nice job.

Ah, I love it, great work. Put a smile on my face.

Aw, thankies! That's a really cute poem. ;) Happy Easter right back at ya. Thanks for reviewing my haiku, too. Have fun!

This is very nice. Thank you for the review. Elliott Smith is a beautiful man..and a constant inspiration for me and so many of his fans. May he rest in peace.