That is so touching, yet incredibly sad. It brought tears to my eyes as I read it. Did that really happen? *eyes widen* I have heard nothing of it. That's horrible. Beautifully written however, a true work of art. I congratulate you for your amazing poem. But work a bit on the flow of the piece. Overall, it was lovely.
-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-

oh my goodness, that is so sad.

Woah... That's.. really creepy. It was a great poem, but still... the poor girl. Was that a true story?

that's so sad. and to christians probably very symbolic. but we ain't goin there. it's a good poem.

Oh, wow, that was powerful and scary...but awefully good too.
::sniff:: I wish it wasn't real though...
Good work with the flow and all.
Keep it up.
Little Dog Muse