thats so true, you never know when it will be your last day, guess you should just live everyday at its best (and try to make home work the least torturous)

"Who knows, save for Destiny?" Cool!
Hawke

;) wonderful!

I greatly enjoyed this poem, I find it wonderful and sickenly true. "Such wickedness we experience and yet seldom we cry" is true ina way because from things I have seen the evil is commiting these wicked acts but so many are so evil already that there are not enough of us left to cry. If we don't regain our world and end this pain and evil then Destiny is just going to watch us fade away in flames. Destiny can't save us we have to do that ourselves.

M, interesting, though listening to 'The Witch Doctor - DDR remix' totally ruined the mood of this poem, hehehe. Oops?
Great work though!
Keep it up!
Little Dog Muse