Love the word usage. The flow is really amazing.

This is really good. I write lots of short poems too. They can sometimes be the best ones because there can never be too much, get what I'm saying?

Way to go dude!

I find myself longing for your longer, more in depth poems. This is good though.
Hawke

just magnificent!

Yup. That's time for ya.
Very very nice, you described it perfectly AND made it rhyme! *is very envious*
Karasu

This is an exact statement of Time. I really enjoyed the length of it, I think it was perfect for the subject and ideas you put forth. Good work, Matt. Perhaps you could write a few more like this one-I really liked the style!

And time keeps going even if we don't.
Great work and a good choice of words.
Keep it up!
Little Dog Muse