wow

I don't know, this poem just didn't do it for me. I like how there is no cliche, but all the same, it does have the "wow" factor that your other poems do.
Hawke

Nice. I like the fact you didn't use alot of cliches. Well done.

nice poem

M A very interesting point of evil. Nice imagery though I feel the hate again I have for evil after reading this poem. It really appeals to my senses.

No, not your best, but still great.
*shivers in delight* how wonderfully you have described evil, "Putrid slime" and "Twisted reality"... *shivers again* eeheehee!
Karasu

Hmm, a wee bit strange but a good insight on "evil".
You have a funny arrangement of words from what I've read so far, but that's all right! Everyone needs their own style.
Great work!
Keep it up!
Little Dog Muse