Until now I have not been able to appreceate the full beauty of this piece. I know the felings you are expressing in this one and I really like the way you have worded this poem. just a question, aren't yo a litle thesaurus happy? good poem

wow.. this is awesome.. i love and can relate to every word

sorry i haven't reviewed your work in a while, i've been busy preparing mine for publication in book form.
I enjoy this poem, especially the part where you go, "repulsive" then a line then Repugnant then a line. It works very well but perhaps that theme could have been used more through out the poem.

You know I won't freak out. I can't say the same for anyone else, of course, but hey, whatever, skrew them. I read this one as you were just finishing it during school, and I still love it. What were those two words you had written on the side of the page that I loved? I don't want to use them but they were so good. I need a pocket thesaurus. I really like the lines 'a geography map of scars' and someday the facade will betray me', and the last line, 'my life will end in a permanent escape.' I think we both need boyfriends to tell us that we're beautiful. Luv ya, maybe you can store some of your creative mind in a basket and just give it to me, eh? I need it!

That's scary, I can relate to those feelings and I can't say that they are altogether in the past at times. Well its good to know you're getting over it... or that you already have. Great job!

I have to say that this is a great poem. I find myself releating to it. well done.

wow i love this one just like the rest of your fics and thanx for the reviews