this one was different...many people can probably relate to the feeling of giving up one thing for another, but probably don't write about it that much...this one was really great! keep up the good work!

the whole part about "seeds of hope" and the "ground in which i do not know" was very clever, and read well. you. i really like this one. and although the whole "simple:" thing is unusal, it worked for you. Not like anything else you write doesn't. I still am convinced that you are amazing. Another Exelent job,
~me

Nice expression of emotions here! I liked it a lot and can relate! Write on!